Tuesday, May 3, 2011

BLOG 15 PART 2 : FAMILY FARMS

   As a person who has been living  in a big city, I definitely agree with  the idea of  supporting family farms. I believe that family farms are very importand for our life. Because, i feel that it is the only one way that we can get our fresh and healty foods. However, according to farm aids, small family farms keep our enviroment much more clean than big companies do.But unfortunately, big companies force small family farms go out of the business which might make a lot harder to find fresh food for people.

  First of all, I strongly believe that family farms are only one way to get the fresh, healthy, and high quality food. Because, they produce their milk, meat or eggs in a natural way which mean they never use chemical in their product. However, they let their animals graze in natural environment, and they never let them eat artificial food. Thus, they can get healthy product from their animals.For example, if we visit a family farm, we will see that how these animals live in welfare and in a good condition.

  Second of all, family farms keep their community clean and also guarantee the preservation of green space with in the community. Because they do not have a lot of animals in their farms as much as big factories have. Therefore, they have less animal excrement, and it is easy to clean it. On the other hand, they do not have chemical wastes, because they never use chemicals in their product. Thus, they keep their water and land clean around their farms. If we visit a modern farm, we can easily see how the water is dirty because of  their chemical and animal excrement wastes.

   However, recently  modern factories are getting bigger and bigger everyday, and try to keep those small family farms out of the business. According to farm aids, every week 330 farmers leave their land, and very few young people become farmer today. Unfortunately, it is going to be very hard to find fresh, and healthy food for us in the future. I strongly believe that we need family farms product for our health. Because, definitely those chemicals are going to effect our health in negative way. For example, if we buy a box of milk we can read what kind of  harmful chemical does it contain in it.

   As a result, we all have to realize that how family farms are important for our life. However they are important for our environment as well. They keep our community clean and provide us high quality, and healthy food. Thus, we have to support family farm business by not buying modern farms product.

15 comments:

  1. very good! you have good reasons to shows we need to support more family farmers in the world. because this problem will effect to the human body. so, we need a health body.

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  2. Hi~ My nickname is Cooooool~Dog from Korea ^^
    First of all, I think your essay structure is really great!! Nice introduction, strong body paragraphs and clear conclusion make me that you are a ENG099 student as well. I have learned many things from your posting. Finally I realize that I need to think about the Meatrix once again. Thanks!

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  3. Hi, my name is Mami. I enjoyed reading your summary.I agree with your opinion that we have to know how important the family farms in our life. Otherwise we never be healthy. We should support the family farms as much as we can!!

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  4. Hello, I am Curious George

    I agree with you.Factory farms are dangerous for us and others only one way we safe our life to support family farms. Where is your summery? what about you are you supporting in routine life?

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  5. hey, i totally agree with you that big markets are forcing small companies out of business. In other words, the healthy animals small companies was creating by time and good qualities are now losing business. And big markets who make the process faster of making an animal a lot more faster.

    I like your summary is very good it has a lot of productive information.

    If you ever get a chance of doing things different of how big markets are treating animals what would you do?

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  6. This is a good reflection. I agree with you, The Meatrix film presented to us how factory farms are doing rudely behavior with animals. Factory farms only think about how they could earn more money, but they don't think how much affect on people.

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  7. hi my name is naila your response to the THE MEATRIX is well written. you had well written complete essay. we have to admit that many products contain chemicals. Factory farmers are significant in our life. we should support them.

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  8. Hi,I'm MD. You wrote a big nice summary. I think you have good opinion. we should support family farm. Do you like to buy family farm's meat yourself?

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  9. my name is yusuf. your organization is very nice. i like to your additional word like first, second, however. i agree with you, family farm can solve this problem and we need to help them.

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  10. you wrote a good essay and i also believe that family farm are very important to uor life because family farm are healthy and safety for our eviroment. what you think the government should do about it

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  11. hi, i totally agree with you family farms are very important.

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  12. Hello Baris! My name is Ala and I am one of the Professor Jason’s students.

    Reading your summary “The Meatrix", I realized that you have completed writing the correct summary of the videos. Also you have structured it very well. I think you wrote even better the essay “Family Farms”. Where the thesis statement is very clear” I definitely agree with the idea of supporting family farms. I believe that family farms are very importand for our life”, and evidently you are supporting it with two good reasons. Baris you have stated that we should buy only from family farm products and not from modern farm. My question is what it has to be done in order for people to start buying family farm products? Because there are a lot of people who don’t know to make much difference between them.
    What I think would be helpful for your future writings, is to try to write your essays in Microsoft Word and copy paste it on your blog. Because I saw a lot of words misspelled. Good luck Baris!

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  13. hello my name is charmaine . Baris i strongly agree with your point of supporting family farming . you made a lot of good point in your summary about family farming like the eating of healthy product and being in a clean enviroment.Baris do you think in the future you would ever change your mine about factory farming.

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  14. Hi I'm Eduard.I agree with everything you said.Family farms should continue. They are better for our food and the environment. How can we find the family farms and do you think there are ways we can help the family farms from being put out of business/

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